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 ###### by [Justin Ethier](https://github.com/justinethier)
 
-This is a revision of the [original write-up](Writing-the-Cyclone-Scheme-Compiler.md), written over a year ago in August 2015, when the compiler was self hosting but before the new garbage collector was written. This version includes everything that has happened since then and attempts to provide a constructive background on how Cyclone was written.
+This is a revision of the [original write-up](Writing-the-Cyclone-Scheme-Compiler.md), written over a year ago in August 2015, when the compiler was self hosting but before the new garbage collector was written. So much time has passed that I thought it would be worthwhile to provide a brain dump of sort for everything that has happened in the last year and half. Again, this write-up is an attempt to provide a constructive background on the various components of Cyclone and how they were written.
 
-Before we get started, I want to say **Thank You** to everyone that has contributed to the Scheme community. Cyclone is based on the community's latest revision of the Scheme language and wherever possible existing code from the community was reused or repurposed for this project, instead of starting from scratch. At the end of this document is a list of helpful online resources. Without high quality Scheme resources like these the Cyclone project would not have been possible.
+Before we get started, I want to say **Thank You** to all of the contributors to the Scheme community. Cyclone is based on the community's latest revision of the Scheme language and wherever possible existing code was reused or repurposed for this project, instead of starting from scratch. At the end of this document is a list of helpful online resources. Without high quality Scheme resources like these the Cyclone project would not have been possible.
 
-In addition, developing [Husk Scheme](http://justinethier.github.io/husk-scheme) helped me gather much of the knowledge that would later be used to create Cyclone. In fact the primary motivation in building Cyclone was to go a step further and understand how to build a full, free-standing Scheme system. At this point Cyclone has eclipsed the speed and functionality of Husk and it is not clear if Husk will receive much more than bug fixes going forward. Maybe if there is greater interest from the community some of this work can be ported back to that project.
+In addition, developing [Husk Scheme](http://justinethier.github.io/husk-scheme) helped me gather much of the knowledge that would later be used to create Cyclone. In fact the primary motivation in building Cyclone was to go a step further and understand how to build a full, free-standing Scheme system. At this point Cyclone has eclipsed the speed and functionality of Husk and it is not clear if Husk will receive much more than bug fixes going forward. Maybe if there is an interest from the community some of this work can be ported back to that project.
 
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